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miss Death
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Mano kuryba Mar 30, 2005 13:58:05 GMT -5

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Post by miss Death on Mar 30, 2005 13:58:05 GMT -5

Tai va cia mano kuryba...

Svarsciau ar deti ar ne, bet Sentenced ikalbejo...

AMZINAI
Tu perbraukei ranka mano plaukus ir pazvelgei man i akis. Man buvo skaudu palikti Tave, bet as jau nusprendziau pasitraukti… Amzinai. Tik norejau atsisveikinti su Tavimi… Paskutini kartà palieciau Tavo plaukus, paskutini kartà palaikiau Tave uz rankos ir paskutini kartà pajauciau Tavo lupu skoni… Tu neisivaizdavai, kaip buvo sunku palikti Tave, mintyse tariant “sudie”… Bet Tu zinojai, kad mylesiu Tave… Amzinai.

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KRUVINOS ASAROS ANT BALTO SNIEGO
Stiklines tavo akys, atrode, net nemate manes… Jos ziurejo kazkur, i horizontà… Jos mate tik paskutini sauleleidi… Paemiau ledine tavo rankà, bet tu nereagavai… Tu nebematei manes… Tu nebenorejai matyti… Tu palikai mane… Ir nezadëjai sugrizti… Að verkiau kruvinomis asaromis, kai tu isejai… Bet tau tai buvo nebesvarbu… Sustingusios is salcio mano lupos, vos istare paskutini “mylesiu amzinai…”… Mano sirdis duzo s sukes, kurios taip skaudziai gele… Tik tavo prisiminimà nesioju savyje… Savo viduje, bet ne sirdyje, nes jos jau nebeturiu… Ji suduzo i sipulius, kuriu sulipdyti neimanoma… Að klupejau prie antkapio, musu meiles antkapio… Tokio salto ir siurkstaus – kaip tavo sirdis… Klupejau ir verkiau… Kruvinos mano asaros lasejo ant balto sniego… ---

JI PADARE TAI
Vonioje ramiai tyvuliavo kruvinas vanduo. Ten sustinges gulejo Jos kunas. Jos plaukai graziai pluduriavo vandenyje. Is venu vis dar tekejo ryskiai raudonas kraujas.
Staiga, ibego Jis. Jis sustojo, isplete akis ir ziurejo i Jà. Jo akyse pasirode baime, liudesys, nusivylimas ir galu gale pyktis. Jis pyko, nes nezinojo, kodel Ji padare TAI. Bent jau mane, kad nezinojo… Stengesi sau isiteigti, kad nezinojo…

Last Edit: Mar 30, 2005 14:06:26 GMT -5 by miss Death

Take me,
take me in your arms my love and rape me,
don't hide behind your rage
I know you love me,
and always will,
you're my possession,
of that my love there really is no question,
don't hide behind your rage
I know you love me
and always will...

soske moderator Posts: 447	Mano kuryba Mar 30, 2005 14:19:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by soske on Mar 30, 2005 14:19:20 GMT -5 labai grazu..tikrai..ypac tas vidurinis..tikrai moki rasyt.. ;D
	Sweet Dreams

Sentenced moderator Eto ne liubov' Posts: 1,217	Mano kuryba Mar 31, 2005 3:20:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sentenced on Mar 31, 2005 3:20:10 GMT -5 Visai gerai parasyta.....Tiesa pasakius nelabai matau, ka cia kritikuoti, kaip tu sakei, kad tave kritikavio.....

miss Death general moderator ?Gothic Vampire? Posts: 626	Mano kuryba Mar 31, 2005 12:40:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by miss Death on Mar 31, 2005 12:40:40 GMT -5 soske, aciu sentenced, aciu.. Gal tau atrodo, kad nera ka kritikuoti, bet kai idejau i viena psl. tai... Viskas negerai - mintys padrikos, per banalu ir pan. ...
	Take me, take me in your arms my love and rape me, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me, and always will, you're my possession, of that my love there really is no question, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me and always will...

Sentenced
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Eto ne liubov'

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Mano kuryba Mar 31, 2005 13:20:24 GMT -5

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Post by Sentenced on Mar 31, 2005 13:20:24 GMT -5

Banaluma kiekvienas supranta kitaip..... Aisku, tai nera kokia nors ten jau nepakartojama kuryba(nepyk jei izeidziau), bet vis tiek gerai...Juk buna tokiu kvailu eilerasciu ar kuriniu, o ju kurejas dedasi, kad yra pats talentingiausias rasytojas... talenta irgi reikia vystyti.... pazesim, po keliu metu, ka tau tie, kurie isvadino kurinius banalybe, pasakys.... 8-)

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vampire Administrator Posts: 1,885	Mano kuryba Mar 31, 2005 13:38:07 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by vampire on Mar 31, 2005 13:38:07 GMT -5 grazu...vidurinis fainiausias...

miss Death general moderator ?Gothic Vampire? Posts: 626	Mano kuryba Mar 31, 2005 14:08:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by miss Death on Mar 31, 2005 14:08:15 GMT -5 Sentenced,.. vampire,.. aciuz.. *
	Take me, take me in your arms my love and rape me, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me, and always will, you're my possession, of that my love there really is no question, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me and always will...

Stargazer moderator Posts: 575	Mano kuryba Apr 1, 2005 8:05:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Stargazer on Apr 1, 2005 8:05:48 GMT -5 Hmm..Siaip neblogi kurineliai, bet man nelabai patinka...

chipie moderator Death's in love with us ... Posts: 354	Mano kuryba Apr 1, 2005 12:17:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by chipie on Apr 1, 2005 12:17:00 GMT -5 man tai labai patiko...kaip ir visom-2 ...tikrai padare ispudi
	Last Edit: Apr 1, 2005 12:19:45 GMT -5 by chipie "life is short and love is always over in the morning"-Ville Valo

miss Death general moderator ?Gothic Vampire? Posts: 626	Mano kuryba Apr 2, 2005 2:10:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by miss Death on Apr 2, 2005 2:10:13 GMT -5 Stargazer, aciu uz atviruma... chipie, thanx.. ;D
	Take me, take me in your arms my love and rape me, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me, and always will, you're my possession, of that my love there really is no question, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me and always will...

Eleanor moderator man nusibodo taip gyvent, kai negaliu taves paliest Posts: 53	Mano kuryba Apr 4, 2005 11:47:20 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eleanor on Apr 4, 2005 11:47:20 GMT -5 nebogai........... bet paskutinis man nelabai..... o vidurinis tikrai mielas
	Metal_fan

miss Death general moderator ?Gothic Vampire? Posts: 626	Mano kuryba Apr 4, 2005 12:12:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by miss Death on Apr 4, 2005 12:12:26 GMT -5 Aciu.. Paskutinis, tarp kitko, ir sulauke daugiausiai kritikos..
	Take me, take me in your arms my love and rape me, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me, and always will, you're my possession, of that my love there really is no question, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me and always will...

Sentenced moderator Eto ne liubov' Posts: 1,217	Mano kuryba Apr 5, 2005 2:05:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sentenced on Apr 5, 2005 2:05:53 GMT -5 zinai, tas paskutinis atrodo, toks neisplestas.... Pati situacija grazi.... bet mintis, kazkaip neispletota.... Man paciai 1-as nelabai koks....

Eleanor moderator man nusibodo taip gyvent, kai negaliu taves paliest Posts: 53	Mano kuryba Apr 5, 2005 4:26:09 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Eleanor on Apr 5, 2005 4:26:09 GMT -5 man tai pirmas patinka.............
	Metal_fan

miss Death general moderator ?Gothic Vampire? Posts: 626	Mano kuryba Apr 5, 2005 11:12:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by miss Death on Apr 5, 2005 11:12:44 GMT -5 Aisku..
	Take me, take me in your arms my love and rape me, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me, and always will, you're my possession, of that my love there really is no question, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me and always will...

Fulguritus general moderator Posts: 368	Mano kuryba Apr 10, 2005 7:09:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Fulguritus on Apr 10, 2005 7:09:01 GMT -5 o man visi patinka... kritika menininkui gerai, bet kai jos per daug, tai tada jau blogai... vat... visi trys tavo kuriniai tikrai grazus... man net labai patinka...

miss Death general moderator ?Gothic Vampire? Posts: 626	Mano kuryba Apr 10, 2005 10:21:47 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by miss Death on Apr 10, 2005 10:21:47 GMT -5 Fulguritus.. Aciu
	Take me, take me in your arms my love and rape me, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me, and always will, you're my possession, of that my love there really is no question, don't hide behind your rage I know you love me and always will...

Fulguritus general moderator Posts: 368	Mano kuryba Apr 11, 2005 10:29:57 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Fulguritus on Apr 11, 2005 10:29:57 GMT -5 miss said: Fulguritus.. Aciu prasom;)

nosferatus Full member Posts: 123	Mano kuryba Apr 13, 2005 13:44:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by nosferatus on Apr 13, 2005 13:44:46 GMT -5 holly s**t, kox grozis, chia tai lygis, Miss death pavarai:) o chia prie ko vis apie tai kad tave paliko kazkas ? tipo tavo eileraschiu tema rishasi su tuo kad tave paliko draugas , or smt. else?
	GORE OWNS YOU POSERS! numetal is fking gay and anything not ruthless or brutal is gay. What the fk are you still reading this for...pick up a chainsaw and attack some posers!!! mano blog'as

miss Death
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Mano kuryba Apr 15, 2005 14:40:37 GMT -5

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Post by miss Death on Apr 15, 2005 14:40:37 GMT -5

"Holly s**t" vienam sakiny su "nu cia tai lygis" ir "miss Death pavarai"??

kaip suprast?.. Tiesa sakant, manes dar nieks nepaliko.. As tiesiog bandziau isijausti i ta vaidmeni.. Man labiau sekasi rasyt apie tai, ko dar nepatyriau.. Nors dazniausiai buna atvirksciai..

Last Edit: Apr 15, 2005 14:41:56 GMT -5 by miss Death

Take me,
take me in your arms my love and rape me,
don't hide behind your rage
I know you love me,
and always will,
you're my possession,
of that my love there really is no question,
don't hide behind your rage
I know you love me
and always will...

Post by miss Death on Mar 30, 2005 13:58:05 GMT -5

Post by soske on Mar 30, 2005 14:19:20 GMT -5

Post by Sentenced on Mar 31, 2005 3:20:10 GMT -5

Post by miss Death on Mar 31, 2005 12:40:40 GMT -5

Post by Sentenced on Mar 31, 2005 13:20:24 GMT -5

Post by vampire on Mar 31, 2005 13:38:07 GMT -5

Post by miss Death on Mar 31, 2005 14:08:15 GMT -5

Post by Stargazer on Apr 1, 2005 8:05:48 GMT -5

Post by chipie on Apr 1, 2005 12:17:00 GMT -5

Post by miss Death on Apr 2, 2005 2:10:13 GMT -5

Post by Eleanor on Apr 4, 2005 11:47:20 GMT -5

Post by miss Death on Apr 4, 2005 12:12:26 GMT -5

Post by Sentenced on Apr 5, 2005 2:05:53 GMT -5

Post by Eleanor on Apr 5, 2005 4:26:09 GMT -5

Post by miss Death on Apr 5, 2005 11:12:44 GMT -5

Post by Fulguritus on Apr 10, 2005 7:09:01 GMT -5

Post by miss Death on Apr 10, 2005 10:21:47 GMT -5

Post by Fulguritus on Apr 11, 2005 10:29:57 GMT -5

Post by nosferatus on Apr 13, 2005 13:44:46 GMT -5

Post by miss Death on Apr 15, 2005 14:40:37 GMT -5

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