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Post by nosferatus on Apr 17, 2005 8:15:02 GMT -5
"Holly s**t" vienam sakiny su "nu cia tai lygis" ir "miss Death pavarai"?? kaip suprast?.. cia taip suprast kad "nerealiai grazus eilerashchiai tavo"
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Post by miss Death on Apr 17, 2005 11:40:28 GMT -5
cia taip suprast kad "nerealiai grazus eilerashchiai tavo" Aisku..
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Post by bitter on Apr 19, 2005 14:02:52 GMT -5
man ir patiko
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Post by abscisus on May 3, 2005 7:13:31 GMT -5
"Tiesa sakant, manes dar nieks nepaliko.. As tiesiog bandziau isijausti i ta vaidmeni.. Man labiau sekasi rasyt apie tai, ko dar nepatyriau.. Nors dazniausiai buna atvirksciai.. "
turi talenta kalbeti, bet jokios patirties. stilius stilius ir dar karta stilius! ir zodziai neturetu buti bet kokie. vidurini kurini patvarkius stilistiskai ir pamascius apie zodzius, as balsuosiu uz ji visom keturiom!!! rasyk eiles -- geriau pradeti nuo to. sekmes!!!
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Post by miss Death on May 3, 2005 10:10:48 GMT -5
Aciu uz patarimus ir gerus linkejimus, bet nera taip paprasta.. Tiesiog rasau ir viskas.. Ir sitaip gaunasi..
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Post by mistrale on May 11, 2005 11:40:00 GMT -5
::)visai gerai...aisq,kazkas jau sake del stiliaus...tai gali keist ir vengt ikyraus ivardziu kartojimo...ir pabaigos galetu but netiketos...dabar gi aisq kaip pasibaigs... ;)siaip as draugiskai...ir linkiu sekmes ir rizto kuriant,nauju kurybiniu pagavu...
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Post by miss Death on May 22, 2005 2:30:43 GMT -5
aciu, mistrale
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Post by not on Jun 25, 2005 17:22:27 GMT -5
man labai grazus vidurinis eilerastis ir treciojio eilerascio paskutines eilutes
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Post by dzindzer on Jul 10, 2005 6:00:53 GMT -5
faini. ypatingai 2. o 3 labai tragiskas bet visvien geras. tik gaila kad tokie trumpi...
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Post by miss Death on Jul 14, 2005 13:37:13 GMT -5
not<< aciu dzindzer<< aciu. na nezinau, kazkaip gavosi neilgi..
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Post by represser on Jul 26, 2005 15:17:36 GMT -5
tragedijos, tragedijos, tragedijos... ir jus tai vadinate tragedija? paliko bernas merga, nu ir kas cia tokio? tai yprastas reiskinys, ir isvis as netikiu y meile ir pan. zmoniu jausmai vienas kitam, xa! booring... o siaip ziurint is kitos puses taip grazu, moki priderinti zodzius ir t.t bet... man tai labai nuvalkiotas tamsaus poziurio eilerastis, man tai vienodai sviecia kaip jauciasi paliktas zmogus, nesuprantu, kas cia tokio!?!?! : ) kritikia bus visur, bet rasyk, nes moki rasyti, nors tavo mintis man ir nepriimtina, bet verta pagirimo esi, saunuole, taip toliau! nors man labiau patiktu pvz. :
This is the brave new world Love is not love anymore. Every word you say is part of this murder Every thought I have is part of this murder.
Her body tormented To make them happy Murderers without mercy Without heart.
Brand new world with new culture Taught how to live and how to die
To live faster, to have more and more To be beast, beast of our times.
And in this winter morning In the river covered with ice They saw dead body Dead tormented body And her face full of pain Beautiful dress floats on the water...
explanation: Two guys violenced and killed a girl. They did torment her body and than they threw her body to the river. I can't even imagine what punishment they deserve. But there is one thing I know for sure. Those murderers thought that this girl was just their toy. And this is what this culture tell us everyday. Love doesn't exist, just f**k, f**k, f**k everything. It's just a question of pleasure, your pleasure. Our culture says: get more and more, you are the best, other people are just toys. Make money on them or use them to satisfy your needs. And here we have results of such thinking: people with no money because of other's people's greed or worse: dead body in the water...
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Post by miss Death on Jul 28, 2005 13:49:34 GMT -5
represser<< aciu, kad ilgo komentaro parasyt nepatingejai.. aisku, man irgi patiko tas tavo pvz.(gal net labiau), bet kaip iseina, taip ir rasau.negaleciau rasyt nenuosirdziai.tada jau butu ne kuryba, o kazkoks f**king bulls**t.
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godless
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Everything begins,and ends,with me.
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Post by godless on Jul 28, 2005 16:00:59 GMT -5
Labai primena muilo operas.
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Post by represser on Jul 28, 2005 16:15:17 GMT -5
emmm... cia zodziai is mano megstamos dainos jei ka, cia ne eilerastis
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Post by dzindzer on Jul 28, 2005 16:28:58 GMT -5
kas tai per daina?
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Post by miss Death on Jul 29, 2005 14:29:16 GMT -5
represser<< nesvarbu, vistiek grazu
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Post by miss Death on Jul 29, 2005 14:39:15 GMT -5
Na, idesiu dar viena kurinuka, kuri siandien parasiau Apsvaigus nuo Taves Tu suzavejai mane viskuo. Savo saltom akim, rankom, plaukais, krintanciais ant stipriu peciu… Tavo glamones ir buciniai hipnotizavo mane. Kuna ir siela uzvalde begaline aistra. Sniege gulet nebuvo salta – mane susildei Tu. Nuo Tavo prisilietimu as jauciaus lyg transe Tavo buciniai krito ir tirpo ant mano nuogo kuno lyg saltos snaiges. As irgi norejau Taves. Geidziau Taves. Bet jau nebebuvo Taves, nebebuvo manes. Mes susiliejom. Susiliejo kunai, susiliejo sielos. Prisiekinejai amzina meile, Bet palikai tik juoda roze Ir paskutini bucini, Aistros ir liudesio skonio. Tu isejai, Ir palikai mane kentet. Rozes spygliai sukruvino rankas. O ir sniege jau buvo salta… Zmoniu zvilgsniai gele mane kaip rozes spygliai Ir sukruvino siela. Taip, jie suprato, kad blogio sekla pasejai many. Bet man jie nesvarbus… As klaidziojau gatvemis, Susalus ir krauju pasruvus. Ieskojau Taves, Bet Taves nebuvo niekur... Mano pacios asaros degino zaizdas. Man taip skauda, man taip salta... Kodel isejai?
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Post by represser on Jul 29, 2005 14:58:04 GMT -5
Angelreich - Dead Body in the Water o tas eilerastis naujas tai isvis nepatiko, meile meile meile ir dar karta nelaiminga meile, booring...
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Post by miss Death on Jul 29, 2005 15:05:56 GMT -5
represser<< pala, surasi tu savo meile, kitaip snekesi..
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Post by represser on Jul 29, 2005 15:13:45 GMT -5
netikiu y meile, moterys reikalingos tik fiziniais sumetimais...
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